tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5542765647182992554.post3181867935101695257..comments2023-05-30T09:24:33.451-04:00Comments on Passion's Fruit: 1st Love, 2nd Chance...3 Hearts ~Epilogue-A Year Later~Thee_Kweenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08407574065109052178noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5542765647182992554.post-81934685007004952892009-06-10T04:35:39.791-04:002009-06-10T04:35:39.791-04:00Oh you're so very right. Trust that it was wri...Oh you're so very right. Trust that it was written from a dramatic point and not an ethical one. LOL<br /><br />I like the way I ended it...mostly because it shows how extremely unpredictable these situations can be. This stuff can happen...stranger things have...but, I'd hope that SOME one would see it and remember to not cross a line they think is easy to tread.<br /><br />Thanks for reading, bruh.Thee_Kweenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08407574065109052178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5542765647182992554.post-37485144903772007422009-06-10T01:55:10.737-04:002009-06-10T01:55:10.737-04:00Wow both endings were deep. He was wrong, he didn&...Wow both endings were deep. He was wrong, he didn't deserve to die but he should not have done layla like that because anybody willing to cross close blood like that, is cracked and fragile beyond imagining.<br /><br />The relationship between nat and beryl is an interesting development to. Though maybe it's a guy thing but I think beryl is wrong for not telling Nat that Preston is hassans. It's almost like she is keeping one bit of hassan from nat that she will never know about. A child needs a father but he also needs to know where he came from.<br /><br />Guy point of view though. great story I loved the way you brought it to a close.Primaldatahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01835938456938540721noreply@blogger.com