Wednesday, April 29, 2009

The Coatroom Pt 1




She had the face of an angelic child...not one that would be likened to a woman of lustful and naughty intentions. She had a thick but solid frame...thick legs, well-shaped ass, full breasts...double d's. Skin the color of caramel topping...shoulder length natural hair that was made up of tight curls she usually wore in a pulled back head band. Your average earth goddess personified with the allure of an innocent presence. She'd always pursued what she wanted, but was so subtly seductive that most guys thought the seduction was THEIR idea and not hers. She could be considered a siren from mythology. Her soft sweet words served as a song. Whether it was hi, bye or have a nice day...her breath carried sweet pheromones that made the knees of men weak.
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He was ruggedly handsome. Square jaw lined with a perfect goatee. Almond shaped eyes in a shade of deep blue with flecks of gray. Dark brown hair cut close and shaped nicely to frame his handsomeness. He wasn't overly "stacked" but he was fit. Not like he'd busted his ass in the gym, but like it was naturally given to him by God to be that fine. Medium build, average height and a strong intense smile that lit up the space he occupied. He was decent and had only been in 1 relationship in all his life. At 32, he'd been in love with the same woman since 8th grade. They were married and lived happily until he discovered she'd cheated on him with not 1 but THREE of his best friends from high school. Love has escaped him ever since. Barely dating and only sleeping with one other woman since...his neighbor from high school.
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She was asked to a restaurant by a girlfriend to celebrate a promotion. It was not on her list of things to do, but she decided to be supportive and go along.
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He was lonely and hadn't been out on a date in a while, so to get himself out of a funk, asked his "regular"...the old neighbor to go out to dinner.
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She spotted him first. She'd ordered a glass of Merlot and as she was handing the waiter back the wine menu, she saw him. She could see the color of his eyes flickering off the candle centered at the table. The woman he was with was plain in her eyes. She lacked personality and was clearly a stand-in for someone else. For the entirety of the salad course, she stared every chance she got. Even though he was clearly NOT into his date he maintained respectful eye contact with the neighbor. She needed to make herself noticeable.
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He was talking casually to his neighbor and they chuckled politely as he secretly thought that this would be the last "date" for him and her. She wasn't his ex and since he never got her out of his system, it made it hard to concentrate on the woman before him. He decided to sit out the dinner politely and then tell her before he dropped her off, that their "casual sex" would be no more.
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He excused himself to go to the men's room, while dessert was being served. He told his neighbor to get anything she wanted and to get the same for him.
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As soon as "she"...Ms. Earth Goddess, saw him move, she excused herself from her table, telling her friend that she had to go to the ladies' room.
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He walked slowly in the direction of the dining room's hallway as she scurried along trying to catch up. Once she approached him, she slowed her gait finally bumping into him.
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"Excuse me, I'm so sorry." she feigned. "No problem he said nonchalantly, indicating to her that he barely noticed her. She had to make her move, so she said bluntly and out of character, "I cant lie, Ive been watching you all night and you're so handsome, so beautiful. I had to meet you. This encounter indeed is NO accident." He looked at her perplexed and said, "Well, I am flattered, but I am here with..." She cut him off swiftly. "...you are no more interested in her than I am. Like I said, Ive been watching you all night and if she cant pick up on the indifference towards her, she is either really desperate or really whipped." He laughed out loud and said, "Wow, you're the most forward woman I've met to date." She took it as a compliment and said, "Thank you...now, lets stop playing. Fuck me. I can tell you need it and I definitely want it. Step inside that empty coat room over there and bend me over." His tongue literally wagged and he took a step back and said, "Whoa...wait, slow down young lady!" She said unabashedly, "Why? So you can think about it and stop yourself. So you can consider the "seat filler's" feelings? I can tell you are in need of a little TLC...let me give it to you. No one will know. You can do what you will with me and I will walk out of here like nothing happened." She moved closer to him. He could smell her breath. It smelled of wine, but wasn't offensive. She slid her hand inside his jacket and ran it up his chest, down and around to the middle of his back. "Now would you allow me to get so close if you DIDN'T want me?" she said chuckling impishly. As if his manhood had been challenged he retreated from her touch and said, "Good evening, Ms...Ms..." She said, "Well, if we must be formal my name is Angelle." He laughed out loud and so incredulously that she was taken off guard and took a few steps back. She looked in her clutch and pulled out her wallet and slapped her ID open like she was flashing a badge. She said nothing as he stepped forward and peeped her ID, where it clearly stated, "Angelle H. McCloud". His laughter increased and she said, "WOW, you're REALLY trying to offend a girl", as she shook her head placing the small ID wallet back in her purse. He said, "AWWW, come on! Tell me that you didn't expect me to at LEAST chuckle? Your name is ANGELLE H. MCCLOUD! Thats not supposed to be funny? Let me guess...The "H" is for "Heaven". She looked at him furiously and snapped..."YES...IT IS!" She said nothing else...turned on her heels and began storming off. Something clicked inside of him and he ran behind her gently pulling her arm. She snatched it away and said, "You really DO need a fuck. You're a tight ass and whats worse...you're a JERK! Don't touch me...go back to your wallflower and DREAM about what could've taken place tonight." She walked back into the dining room and he followed while straightening out his jacket and tie. He resumed his dessert with the neighbor as she went on to finish out her meal with her friend. He couldn't take his eyes off of her the rest of the evening and THIS time the neighbor took notice to his oblivion. She began to feel like she'd never felt before with him...meaningless. Seeing that the night was coming to a fast close, the neighbor helped end things quickly with him and the two of them got the check and started to leave. Somewhere between dessert and the check, Angelle got out of his line of sight. Him and the neighbor had driven in separate cars so he walked her to hers and watched as she sped off perturbed. He felt good about it though, no more pity sex...he was ready to experience something real and unique.
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Instead of going to his own car and driving home, he went back into the restaurant to look for her. He looked near the restrooms and back into the dining room and then as he neared the coat room, he saw no one. He stopped and tried to figure out how he could find a way to reach her when a hand snatched him inside the coat room.
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"I KNEW you wanted it!" Angelle said as she kissed him hard but sensually. Her hands were everywhere. She was unbuckling his belt, then pulling up her own skirt...she was ravenous. Their tongues locked into scorching kisses that caused her center to melt and his groin to quiver. He stopped to look at her and she smiled so wickedly that his dick grew another inch...
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He spun her around, bent her over and placed the length of him in between her ass cheeks. He whispered, "You don't know what you have gotten yourself into". She giggled and said, "Shut up, fuck me and make me cum!". The heels she was wearing put her in perfect position to bring their throbbing parts together. He teased the entrance, slowly entering and then thrust himself into her, causing her back to arch. He fucked her so hard and so good, so quickly that the thought crossed her mind fleetingly..."I love you"...One orgasm, two orgasms, a third and then BAM, her fourth orgasm met his and he stood there pressed firmly inside of her, emptying himself. She pushed him off of her with her backside and freed herself. She opened her purse, pulled out a wipe for her and one for him...cleaned herself off and straightened out her clothes. He was amazed. He was intrigued. He'd cum harder than he could ever remember. He too straightened himself out, and the two walked out of the coat room unnoticed.
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She kissed him on the cheek...slid him her card and said, "Nice, VERY nice. We must do it again!"
He smiled...winked, and agreed without saying a word. She went her way...he went his.
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When he got home, the neighbor was waiting for him. She said, "From the smile on your face, I can see you enjoyed my gift." He walked up to his girlfriend and said, "Lisa baby, you outdid yourself this time...she was perfect!" Lisa kissed him on the lips and said..."Hmmm, maybe I will try her next time!" They looked at each other lustfully, laughed and went inside. Angelle was the dessert before dinner...Lisa was the main course.

10 comments:

(fŭng'kē) [blak] [chik] said...

uh, um, i should have known not to click the maturity button...lol.
girl you need to show zane how to write lol

Da_Kween said...

LMAO...don't be scurred.

That's such a cool ass compliment, sis. *feeling proud*

MzLatese said...

dayyuumm I new you skills but this...well let's just you keep this coming,I won't have to bug you about my other story as much

oh and by the way

very sensual and seductive. Def feeling the way you capture the pure essence of these characters and still able to intrigue the hell out of your viewers.

Da_Kween said...

Thanks Lil Keys...I will try not to keep you waiting too long for the parts. :)

TNPATL said...

Oh my Kiwi you have skills!!! Can't wait to read the other parts.

Da_Kween said...

Thank you so much...I hope you really enjoy them. I had a ball writing it.

♥ CG ♥ said...

Woooweee...me likey the imagery. I agree with Yesha, give Zane some tips :-).

Thee_Kween said...

Thank you so much, Mel...This series is my baby. I hope you read the other parts...

SLynne L said...

OMG!!!!!
I am so blown away right now!!!!

Thee_Kween said...

tee hee...I love that you love it! I think that's why you're blown away right? lol

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